The desired affect shouldn't be so far flung as to miss producing a desirable effect...or having had that effect; afterward the proposal
in the first place. My baffling bad: a play or performance of some
lingering piece of gravity,a difficult situation for an educator to discover...

Rich versus poor. 

Strange references: heading to the Mall,shopping you know...

An often mean neighborhood:  You name...it.

Commentary unfortunately reveals extensive prattle. (I don't like the word but I haven't a better one to go to.)

On with the show...

Action packed speechmaking,you've heard plenty of this...

The prolix and the proliferation of solutions minus the helpful,and the unhelpful adverbs.

Sketchy additions, extraditions